“In the spring, at the end of the day, you should smell like dirt.” (margaret atwood)

light’s dance

fleeting moments

so fleeting
this light that glows and moves
and shines in you

so fleeting
this moment that polishes
up like a yellow sun
the blackened star of
your eye

so what are you doing
in this streaming
moment
where are you shining
that light
that curls out of your fingertips
a solid stream
of smiling energy
lost in the flow
of yesterday’s river
dance

laid down to sleep
crushed petals
of yellow scented syrup
curled around
a poppies red snore

what moment
is this
lost in a thought
of the
waiting
endlessly
waiting
for a perfection that can’t be found
in the light
of dust angels swirling
across your last breathe.

6 comments to light’s dance

  1. Celeste
    April 16th, 2009 at 8:23 pm

    This has just knocked my socks off! I’m swooning here…and that photograph is so dreamy. :-)

    Much love…
    xoxoxo

  2. MonsteRawr
    April 17th, 2009 at 6:38 am

    That photo is surreal! And I love the phrase “the blackened star of your eye”; it makes something so simple and ordinary sound magical.

  3. Claire
    April 17th, 2009 at 3:15 pm

    Beauty abounds.

    Cxx

  4. Suvarna
    April 17th, 2009 at 9:46 pm

    blissful, light, swirling dust angels! beautiful!!!

  5. rebecca
    April 18th, 2009 at 4:59 am

    “laid down to sleep
    crushed petals
    of yellow scented syrup
    curled around
    a poppies red snore”

    This stanza was magnificent. That’s a full poem in itself.

  6. erin
    May 23rd, 2009 at 2:06 am

    supremely gorgeous. ethereal. i love it. (understatement!)

Leave a Reply

You can use these HTML tags

<a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <cite> <code> <del datetime=""> <em> <i> <q cite=""> <strike> <strong>

*
To prove you're a person (not a spam script), type the security word shown in the picture.
Anti-Spam Image