djkreutzer small moments make a life

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home

“home is a place you grow up wanting to leave, and grow old wanting to get back to” (john ed pearce)

bird on a wire

ruffled feathers perched high
a shrill shriek of laughter
scorn and drama
love and misty eyed beaks

the walls seem too crowded
worm wiggles just out of reach
blue sky beckons promises
of dreams fulfilled

soar in bright skies away
lost in the world of bright lights
stoned in the high rise
rock of a glass stream

dreams filter light out
darkness dreams lost
memories crowd in of
a wiggling worm

just out of reach

rain soaked feathers
drip oil. heavy heart
lies weak, eyes flutter
against a chipped beak

scorched thoughts of soft
winged nook. squawk of
laughter, peck of kiss
green grass sway
tree held high away

from the glossy pages of
someone’s else’s version
of home.

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11 Comments

beautiful poem … and the quote is oh, so true!

Posted by the dream on 30 April 2008 @ 4am

when i left this place at 17 i thought it was the back of beyond and couldn’t move fast enough. i moved back at 33.

god, i’m a cliche. :) but i’m pretty happy.

beautiful poem.

Posted by Bon on 30 April 2008 @ 6am

Interesting perspectives on the idea of home! I love the bird house. I didn’t know I was going to be homesick for BC, I’ve moved around a lot and this is the first time I’ve been heartbroken. Can we go back home?

I totally think you should put the Victorian house on your dreamboard Daisies!

Posted by Sacred Suzie on 30 April 2008 @ 7am

Ah so true. So true. I must be getting old.

Posted by doahleigh on 30 April 2008 @ 8am

There’s a birdhouse like that at my folks’ house. I call it The Hotel. I was taking photos of it last summer and the birds started dive-bombing my head. No paparazzi allowed at the Bird Hotel.

Posted by Pamela on 30 April 2008 @ 8am

Darlene,

Such lovely words and a gorgeous photo!! I feel that way about where I grew up. I still love visiting my parents and reliving the old memories.

Posted by jane on 30 April 2008 @ 8am

oh man that was fabulous…that last stanza packed a punch…

Posted by michelle/tangled wings on 30 April 2008 @ 1pm

beautiful words…
you capture so much.

Posted by gkgirl on 30 April 2008 @ 1pm

This sweet poem just makes my heart soar, I love the birds so much. And what a gorgeous photo! Your treatment is just awesome.

Posted by Ladybug on 30 April 2008 @ 2pm

Such gorgeousness! My favorite line is…love and misty eyed beaks.

That birdhouse is so sweet. Is it in your yard? I just love them…
xoxo

Posted by Celeste on 30 April 2008 @ 9pm

eeeeeee! Look at that birdhouse! and with those words… *warm snuggles…

:-)

(((HUGS))),
Love,
Me

Posted by PixieDust on 1 May 2008 @ 11am

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